万科招标采购管理办法:帮忙检查一下有没有语法错误
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But as long as see you, it becomes infinite
No one believes fall in love at first sight
But this kind of special felling is permeating me imperceptibly
I can't fall asleep in every whole night
Because of you I've fallen into the sea of woes
I can't refuse to face the reality
But I hope the pains and sufferings can be ended like the meteor of the downfall
I always see you in the classroom
I am always tormenting myself
I always use a kind of ignorant way to evade
One of my friends told me "DO not use regret to cure your wound"
But I think I am drinking a bottle of water that is filled with helpless
Because I know the taste of being refused
But I don't want to let the pains and sufferings growing in heart
Now, I sincerely want to know you
But as long as see you, it becomes infinite
应为:...as long as i see you...
No one believes fall in love at first sight
应为:...believes in love at first sight.
I can't fall asleep in every whole night
应为:...asleep every night
But I hope the pains and sufferings can be ended like the meteor of the downfall
pain和suffering都是不可数,不用复数。
But I think I am drinking a bottle of water that is filled with helpless
helpless是形容词,考虑用despair或者emptiness呢?
Because I know the taste of being refused
taste最好用feeling
But I don't want to let the pains and sufferings growing in heart
最好用in my heart.growing改成grow.
以上供参考。
没有拉,意思是我的视野范围内,但在我眼里,只要看到只是你,没有人相信它变得无限谈恋爱乍一看,但这是一种特殊的砍伐,我可以潜移默化地渗透到我 ' t入睡,因为你整晚都在我 ' ve落入苦海,我可以 ' t不肯面对现实,但我希望,痛可以结束痛苦像流星的堕落我总是看到你在课堂上,我总是折磨自己,我总是用一种无知的方式来逃避我的一位朋友告诉我 " 不用遗憾治好伤 " 我觉得我喝了一瓶水,充满无奈,因为我知道我的味道,但被拒绝穿上 ' t要让心中的痛苦,现在越来越多的痛苦,我衷心希望你们知道